Startling and informative opening Many people go home to a nice, loving family.They enter the house and are greeted by parents who love them and are happy to see them. This is what every kid should come home to, but when some kids go home their father might hit them or throw them against a wall.Their mom’s live in boyfriend might try to rape them or get them to go out to see his friends.They walk in the house and their mom is drinking or passed out.These are the kids that are afraid to go home, because it isn’t safe.Every kid deserves a home where they are regularly fed, don’t have to worry about getting beat up, or can go to bed without having to worry about being sexually abused.Child abuse is a huge threat to children’s lives and must be stopped.
Quick summary of main question that I mean to answer or reason I think this topic is important Child abuse is a huge threat to children’s lives and must be stopped.Every second we waste is another kid who is being hurt or dyeing.
Two or three most interesting things I learned from research
Kids in foreign countries are adopted on the web.They are adopted for money even though the people selling them abused them enough to disable them. 60% of child abuse cases that are reported are not true.Kids might falsely accuse a teacher just to get attention.Over excited people report child abuse because the kid might have a few bruises.
Confirmation or rejection of one or two commonly held beliefs about this topic If you spank your kid a lot it is child abuse.Excessive spanking can injure a child to disability.If people spank their kids purely out of anger it is child abuse. Foster Care does not always put kids in a safe home.Foster Care just puts kids in a decent house with people who are not a threat to society.This could cause kids to suffer more abuse.
Something to connect the topic to the reader's life so that he/she will care Any kids could be abused by anyone, parents, stepfamily, neighbors, or family friends.Everyday kids are being abused by someone they know and love.Children may be abused in their own house while their parents are in it.The parents may never know that their child is being abused by someone they trust. A closing surprise...intriguing fact, quotation, or discovery from my own research
Kids who are sold on the web are disabled because they were abused by the people who are selling them.Their parents might not feed them enough.Their parents may even abuse and hit them to the point of disability.
Startling and informative opening
Many people go home to a nice, loving family. They enter the house and are greeted by parents who love them and are happy to see them. This is what every kid should come home to, but when some kids go home their father might hit them or throw them against a wall. Their mom’s live in boyfriend might try to rape them or get them to go out to see his friends. They walk in the house and their mom is drinking or passed out. These are the kids that are afraid to go home, because it isn’t safe. Every kid deserves a home where they are regularly fed, don’t have to worry about getting beat up, or can go to bed without having to worry about being sexually abused. Child abuse is a huge threat to children’s lives and must be stopped.
Quick summary of main question that I mean to answer or reason I think this topic is important
Child abuse is a huge threat to children’s lives and must be stopped. Every second we waste is another kid who is being hurt or dyeing.
Two or three most interesting things I learned from research
Kids in foreign countries are adopted on the web. They are adopted for money even though the people selling them abused them enough to disable them. 60% of child abuse cases that are reported are not true. Kids might falsely accuse a teacher just to get attention. Over excited people report child abuse because the kid might have a few bruises.
Confirmation or rejection of one or two commonly held beliefs about this topic
If you spank your kid a lot it is child abuse. Excessive spanking can injure a child to disability. If people spank their kids purely out of anger it is child abuse. Foster Care does not always put kids in a safe home. Foster Care just puts kids in a decent house with people who are not a threat to society. This could cause kids to suffer more abuse.
Something to connect the topic to the reader's life so that he/she will care
Any kids could be abused by anyone, parents, stepfamily, neighbors, or family friends. Everyday kids are being abused by someone they know and love. Children may be abused in their own house while their parents are in it. The parents may never know that their child is being abused by someone they trust.
A closing surprise...intriguing fact, quotation, or discovery from my own research
Kids who are sold on the web are disabled because they were abused by the people who are selling them. Their parents might not feed them enough. Their parents may even abuse and hit them to the point of disability.
Child Abuse FAQ
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